Food can be healthier- Food has a big role in people's lives
- Food is a part of someone's culture
- Food has a passed-down history
- Food is a part of one's identity
- Food has a complex background in different situations
- Food can be used as a way to educate people
- Food can help those with the education of kids
- Different foods have many names
- Food should be embraced
“Latest Posts.” Our Little Roses, www.ourlittleroses.org/blog/embracing-cultural-identity-in-children-through-food/. Accessed 25 July 2023.
I also read this article, so I know that the details you wrote in your 10 on 1 are accurate. The next step I would suggest for you to improve this post is maybe to expand on some of the points you wrote. So for example #6, food has a complex background in different situations, what kind of situations, be specific. Your post is already good, but adding more detail will really add to some of these ideas. -Briana
ReplyDeleteHey christelle! Great job at applying the method to your article. Maybe next tine provide a little more detail so that it flows better. Overall super duper job! :) -Isabella
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